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Post by Guest 2008-11-25, 2:21 pm

here it is:

my first sprite O_O Horriblecatsprite

please be honest and tell me what to work on

EDIT: i fixed some problems and it looks less screwy. heres v3:

my first sprite O_O Horriblecatsprite-2

EDIT: v4 done. fixed shading and weird eyes

my first sprite O_O Horriblecatsprite-3

EDIT: v5 done. fixed shading and spots and added a tail

my first sprite O_O Horriblecatsprite-4


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Post by Guest 2008-11-25, 2:24 pm

its okay but its arms and legs creep me out i dunno why)
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Post by Guest 2008-11-25, 2:25 pm

.... 4
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Post by Damian 2008-11-25, 4:01 pm

Ahhhh! O_O!
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Post by Pajama-Sam 2008-11-25, 4:11 pm

Not bad for a first. But...
It's pillow shaded
There are 2 light sources
One arms is bigger than the other...
Very blocky
Legs are an odd shape
Tail isn't really noticable...
Just giving some C+C to help you improve winking
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Post by Guest 2008-11-25, 6:40 pm

thanks pj-sam :icon_wink:
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Post by Wolfgator 2008-11-26, 12:38 am

Basiaclly what he said, but yeah, not to bad!
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